写了篇英语作文请找出中间的错误不是很会英语啊,请帮帮忙找出错误,越多越好,采纳指出错误最多的目前父母对孩子的生活学习等方

写了篇英语作文请找出中间的错误
不是很会英语啊,请帮帮忙找出错误,越多越好,采纳指出错误最多的
目前父母对孩子的生活学习等方面包办现象非常普遍,请你根据以下提示以We Want to Be Independent为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述这一现象及其弊端,你认为父母应该.孩子应该.字数120-150
In recent years,more and more parents are willing to make arrangeraent about studying and lifeing for their children.Some parents still accompany with their children to study,even to the examinations.In this fashion,children will lose the ability of independant.
In my view parents should abondon the hurse role in their children's life and let their children free to the fascinating world.For the children themselves.should manage our own daily.For example,we should wash our clothes without the help of parents.
If we under the protect of parents.we will not adapt to society in the future.So we want wo be independent.