英语好的大神请进!帮忙找语法错误!
英语好的大神请进!帮忙找语法错误!
an entry about the writing process:
This is the first time I wrote a monologue; It’s a Challenge for me.Itried to find an easy thing to describe.Because I have seen a lot of puppetshows and got much information before and it’s easy forme to describe a puppet,so I decided to be a puppet.I would like to convey a kindof sad emotion to the audience.In my opinion,sadness is one of the mostimportant emotions.It can create something makes people feel moved.I alwayscan get sympathy from a moving movie or play.In order to find inspiration,I foundsome videos and articles about puppet.At first,the puppet was colorful andpopular,but it became old and nobody loves him after it was used and performeda lot,the puppeteer produced it,puppet feels that the puppeteer is his “father”,but he abandoned the puppet,so the puppet lost.This is the Synopsis of mymonologue.I think that in my puppet’s world,his owner and his performance iseverything for him.He comes old and everyone abandons him,that’s the saddestresult for him.At the end of my monologue,I wrote something that can expresshow the puppet wants to go back in time.Because in my monologue,the puppetrepresents sadness and hope lose,so the voice can be deep and husky.Themovements can be slowly and quietly .