这两句英语短句有语法错误嘛请问I was born in ShangHai.Twenty-three years old

这两句英语短句有语法错误嘛请问
I was born in ShangHai.Twenty-three years old this year.My job is accounting.i'm very happy to study English here with everybady.
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solopolo 幼苗

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没有错误,口语来说简单,易懂.
书面语的话,第二句最好改为I am twenty-three years old this yea

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人间大炮一级准备 幼苗

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这个基本上是中式英语
i am twenty three years old from Shanghai and i am a accountant, i am very happy to study English with you guys

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罗文军 幼苗

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男的可以说年龄，女的就别自曝年龄了吧。。。

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7777444477 幼苗

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@ Twenty-three years old this year没有主语，改成 I'm twenty-three years old this year
@ i'm very happy to study English here with everybady. 主语错了，语序不对，everybady. 这个单词打错了的吧应该，应改成 It's very happy for me...

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小厌厌 幼苗

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自我介绍一般都这样：I am XXX, twenty-three years old, born in Shanghai. I am an accountant. I'm very happy to join you in English study here.

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猪头弟弟 幼苗

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没有错误，就是不顺口，I was born in ShangHai. Now I am twenty-three years old .My job is accounting. i'm very happy I can study English here with everybody

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