帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有语法错误

帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有语法错误
I think of things I want to write down,then forget.
I always forget the things that is important to you.
And I still remember the stupid things that you hide from me.
I just realized that's all shit,and that's enough.
I don't know how to tell you that I hurt inside.
I'm so sorry,will you forgive me?
Isn't everything always my fault?
That's all right,I gotta go now.