谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误?（回答有悬赏）

谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误?（回答有悬赏）
Do you know He Jiong?He is my favorite host.I like he presided over a "happy camp".he is not tall or short,he is medium height.And he is very thin.He is a singer,an actor and a host.I think he is very great.He was born in 1974.He is very popular.Do you like him?

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michelle6621 幼苗

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Do you know He Jiong? He is my favorite host .He was born in 1974 and I like him because he presides the "happy camp".he is not tall or short,he is medium height.And he is very thin.He is a singer,an actor and a host.I think he is very great.He is very popular.Do you like him?

以上是根据你的修改的内容,语序调整了一下变的相对通顺点,还有什么问题就问我

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zxz942 举报

有没有语法错误呢？先不管语句通顺？

举报 michelle6621

有啊，.I like he presided over a "happy camp" 这句，宾语有问题。所以，你可以只改这一句，不求更通顺的话。你这句话的意思是我喜欢他主持的快乐大本营还是我喜欢他因为他主持快乐大本营？

zxz942 举报

我喜欢他主持的快乐大本营

举报 michelle6621

i like “happy Camp” presided by him 、、。不好意思，答案肯定迟了。