谁能帮忙看看这篇英语短文有没有语法错误或者标点错误?

Many people think that it’s necessary to hold a spoken English test.The reason is very simple.Lots of students can get high marks in written English test but can’t speak English fluently.( As )With the development of our country,more and more foreign companies set their controlled corporation in China and more and more multinational companies have appeared.Nowadays almost each company needs someone who can speak English smoothly.So people think spoken English test can make people’s oral English become better and better to communicate with foreigners.
x05But a few people think (in)the opposite way.They think that there’s no need to hold spoken English test.Some of them think they are Chinese and they needn’t learn English.Others think there’s little chance for us to use English in our daily life so we needn’t hold spoken English test.We just need to make sure that we know English grammar well and can write English well.That’s enough.
x05In my point of view,I think it’s still necessary to hold spoken English test.We need English.English is a language( which) can( be used) all over the world.We need English to communicate with foreigners.Although the people around us are all Chinese,we should make sure we can speak English well to communicate with others.Nowadays more and more companies would like to do business with foreigners.They need people who can speak English fluently for translations.Spoken English teat can test a person whether he can speak English smoothly enough or not.It also provides a chance for you to practice your oral English.So I will practice my oral English as possible.as I can.
没有改动太多,“Spoken English teat can test a person whether he can speak English smoothly enough or not.”好有待商榷.