哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语短文,看看有多少语法错误、用词不当和结构错误!
哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语短文,看看有多少语法错误、用词不当和结构错误!
In the today,according to the science and technology developing,human being are going to the new era.Many media were provided multifarious information and knowledge to people,such as books,television and theatre.But these type of media have many advantages and disadvantages.
The book is one of prime mode of human being obtained knowledge,and the book is always a best friend of people.Compare book with other media,it can not substitute.But,it have more than disadvantage with others.For example,a book is made from many paper,and many paper consume many tree.From a number of recent studies,a tree is absorbing CO2 3000m³one year,and production O2 3000m³.We think about how much was made a book with tree’s consumption,and how much value of environment of these tree.
Let we see theatre,many countries have a various theatre,such as Beijing opera representative kinds of Chinese theatre.Bunraku is Japanese theatre,and
Italy theatre is one of represent of European’s culture.These theatre were provided that we know a best mode of nation and they were harvest of all people.But compare the book and television,it has many disadvantage,for instance,we must spend many time seat into threat that enjoy it.
From a number of Economist studies,the television is becoming mode of the most importance of people’s media.It bring more convenience since it was birth.It more than message with others,we watch TV when we lay bed and drink Coca-Cola.But television have many disadvantage,such as,it harm children eyes when he(or she) watch TV longtime and it have many unhealthy progress will harm children mentality.
All in all,a various media have many advantage and disadvantage,we must use of their advantage and against their disadvantage.In this way,they are good friend of human being.
注意我不是要翻译,
本人还会在给50分的。并且有可能长期寻求帮助。回复Sinosophy我要是有那水平就不用在这麻烦别人了，我就在这帮助别人了。再说正因为没有这水平才要多写多看呢。
In the today,according to the science and technology developing,human being are going to the new era.Many media were provided multifarious information and knowledge to people,such as books,television and theatre.But these type of media have many advantages and disadvantages.
The book is one of prime mode of human being obtained knowledge,and the book is always a best friend of people.Compare book with other media,it can not substitute.But,it have more than disadvantage with others.For example,a book is made from many paper,and many paper consume many tree.From a number of recent studies,a tree is absorbing CO2 3000m³one year,and production O2 3000m³.We think about how much was made a book with tree’s consumption,and how much value of environment of these tree.
Let we see theatre,many countries have a various theatre,such as Beijing opera representative kinds of Chinese theatre.Bunraku is Japanese theatre,and
Italy theatre is one of represent of European’s culture.These theatre were provided that we know a best mode of nation and they were harvest of all people.But compare the book and television,it has many disadvantage,for instance,we must spend many time seat into threat that enjoy it.
From a number of Economist studies,the television is becoming mode of the most importance of people’s media.It bring more convenience since it was birth.It more than message with others,we watch TV when we lay bed and drink Coca-Cola.But television have many disadvantage,such as,it harm children eyes when he(or she) watch TV longtime and it have many unhealthy progress will harm children mentality.
All in all,a various media have many advantage and disadvantage,we must use of their advantage and against their disadvantage.In this way,they are good friend of human being.
注意我不是要翻译,
本人还会在给50分的。并且有可能长期寻求帮助。回复Sinosophy我要是有那水平就不用在这麻烦别人了，我就在这帮助别人了。再说正因为没有这水平才要多写多看呢。
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给这么高的分,我来认真帮你改一下吧：）我打（）的地方是改动过的.
[]的地方是我没看懂的.
1.（Today）,（due) to the science and technology (development), human being are (entering into a) new era. Many media (are providing) multifarious information and knowledge to people, such as book, television and theatre. But these (） media have many advantages and disadvantages.
2.(Book) is one of （the) prime (modes for) human being (to obtain) knowledge, and (book has always been people's) best friend. (Comparing) book with other media, (it is clear that book can not be substituted). But, it (has some disadvantages compared) with others. For example, (books are made of) paper, and (paper consume a lot of trees). (According to) a number of recent studies, (one tree absorbs 3000m³CO2 a) year, and (produces) 3000m³ O2. We (need to think about how many trees were consumed to make a book and what is the value of these trees to our environment).
3.(Next, let's look at )theatre, many countries have (various types of) (theatres), such as Beijing opera representative kinds of Chinese theatre. Bunraku is Japanese theatre, and
Italy theatre is (a representation) of European’s culture. These (theatres) [were provided that we know a best mode of nation and they were harvest of all people](中括号里的英文我不太明白,所以没改）. But （compared with book and television), it has many (disadvantages), for instance, we must spend (long) time (sitting in the threatre to) enjoy it.
4.From a number of Economist studies, the television is becoming (the most important mode) of people’s media. It (brings) more convenience since (its) birth. [It more than message with others](这句也没明白是什么意思）, we (can) watch TV when we (laying in) bed and (drinking) Coca-Cola. But television (has) many (disadvantages also), such as, it (harms children's) eyes when (they) watch TV (for too long) and it (also has) many (other) unhealthy (aspects which) will harm (children's) mentality.
5.All in all, ()various media have (various advantages and disadvantages), we must (maximize their advantages) and (minimize) their (disadvantages). In this way, (all media will be) good (friends) of human being.
建议将第四段和第三段掉换位置,因为第三段提到了书和电视这两个媒体,而按照现在的顺序在讲第三段的时候还文章没涉及到电视,感觉有点突兀.还有问题你可以直接与我联系.希望能够帮到你：-）
[]的地方是我没看懂的.
1.（Today）,（due) to the science and technology (development), human being are (entering into a) new era. Many media (are providing) multifarious information and knowledge to people, such as book, television and theatre. But these (） media have many advantages and disadvantages.
2.(Book) is one of （the) prime (modes for) human being (to obtain) knowledge, and (book has always been people's) best friend. (Comparing) book with other media, (it is clear that book can not be substituted). But, it (has some disadvantages compared) with others. For example, (books are made of) paper, and (paper consume a lot of trees). (According to) a number of recent studies, (one tree absorbs 3000m³CO2 a) year, and (produces) 3000m³ O2. We (need to think about how many trees were consumed to make a book and what is the value of these trees to our environment).
3.(Next, let's look at )theatre, many countries have (various types of) (theatres), such as Beijing opera representative kinds of Chinese theatre. Bunraku is Japanese theatre, and
Italy theatre is (a representation) of European’s culture. These (theatres) [were provided that we know a best mode of nation and they were harvest of all people](中括号里的英文我不太明白,所以没改）. But （compared with book and television), it has many (disadvantages), for instance, we must spend (long) time (sitting in the threatre to) enjoy it.
4.From a number of Economist studies, the television is becoming (the most important mode) of people’s media. It (brings) more convenience since (its) birth. [It more than message with others](这句也没明白是什么意思）, we (can) watch TV when we (laying in) bed and (drinking) Coca-Cola. But television (has) many (disadvantages also), such as, it (harms children's) eyes when (they) watch TV (for too long) and it (also has) many (other) unhealthy (aspects which) will harm (children's) mentality.
5.All in all, ()various media have (various advantages and disadvantages), we must (maximize their advantages) and (minimize) their (disadvantages). In this way, (all media will be) good (friends) of human being.
建议将第四段和第三段掉换位置,因为第三段提到了书和电视这两个媒体,而按照现在的顺序在讲第三段的时候还文章没涉及到电视,感觉有点突兀.还有问题你可以直接与我联系.希望能够帮到你：-）
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