修改英语作文,找语病!急!在线等!谢谢!

修改英语作文,找语病!急!在线等!谢谢!
My best friend
My best friend is time. She is both my best friend and my teacher. I got to know her thirteen years ago.
Time is very equity. She is never gives anyone more time or gives other people few time. If you work hard , time is very kind . She can make you feel time is very long . But if you don't konw how to use time , even waste time , time will be very short .
Time is also my good teacher . She teaches me a lot of things , such as saving time and things , holding changce and so on .
Time lets me konw should plan future . I want to be a psychologist when I grow up . I think psychologist can help lots of people solve their problems . Time thinks I will be a very good psychologist .
Time and I although never meet each other , but we will always be the best friend .