请问这篇托福作文能得多少分?同意否在小区建工厂There is a general discussion today a

请问这篇托福作文能得多少分?
同意否在小区建工厂
There is a general discussion today about building a new factory near the community,those who criticize that the factory may have many disadvantages.In my point of view,there may be some drawbacks of this arrangement; however,I believe that there are far more advantages.
As a popular saying goes,” everything has two sides.” The progress of building a factory may bring us some troubles.On the other hand,we will benefit more and more from the new factory.We all know that China is still a developing country and there is still many people who have difficulty in obtaining a job,by building the new factory,we will have an excellent opportunity to work there.thus,the new factory can not only help the people who is unemployed but also make contribution to the economic of local government.
Another advantage that cannot be ignored is that it will promote the development of other commercial activities near the community,such as shopping mall,restaurant and chemist’s shop,people can buy everything near the community without a car,which will definitely leads to the time-saving,what’s more,we may use the rest of the time to do some entertainment,that’s definitely offer us lots of facility.
However,some people hold the view that a minor disadvantage to building a factory is the environmental pollution.For instance,a factory may produces a large amount of waste water and waste gases everyday,that increasing pollution may cause some problems that affects people’s daily life.
From what has been discussed above,we could safely reach the conclusion that although there may be some disadvantages to building a new factory near the community,the advantages are more obvious.In addition,by building the factory,people’s living standards will be improved to new heights.In my opinion,there are the two most important advantages for us to consider,we will find it is of great value to them.