麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇文章,语法错误,和连贯性,

麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇文章,语法错误,和连贯性,
good morning,everyone.now i'm going to introduce my family to you.may my home is not the best,but i love my home.i love my parents and my cute little dog.
i think i live in a happy family.my parents are both keen on their job,while they never forget to love our home.my parents usually respect what i thought and what i want to do.they give me a very free space to grow.so here i live happiness.unfortunately,my grandparents have living in heaven for several years and i think there they also live very well.
this is my family,a happy harmonious home.i love it
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good morning,everyone.now i'd like to introduce my family to you.Perhaps my home is not the best,but i still love it so much.i love my parents as well as my cute little dog.
i think i live in a happy family.my parents are both keen on their jobs,meanwhile they never forget to show their love to us.my parents usually respect what i think and what i want to do.they give me very free space in which i blossom(同样是表达成长,这个词会好点,happily.unfortunately,my grandparents have been living in heaven for several years and i think there they also live very well.
this is my family,a happy and harmonious one that i love with all my heart.

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