帮我修改一下这篇文章英语作文(具体指点出哪里错误啊,
帮我修改一下这篇文章英语作文(具体指点出哪里错误啊,
Recently.there is a heated discussion about whether people can play game while on duty or canot.some people maintain that people relax pressure by play game.besides playing game can raise the efficiency of work.
Qiute the contrary.The other people says,playing game should forbid while on dute.
on one hand,boss paid for employee,so employee should do better work while on dute.on the other hand,playing game effect the efficiency of work,because employee could not concentrated on work .
personally,I believe that our first task is do the best work in law time.As a good worker ,we should take advantage of time for work.what is more important that relaxing pressure can by many means,such as ,have a drink or a shortly chat .
so .now.lets we have a positive attitude,better work ,better learning .better enjoying work