麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,看看哪些地方有错误

I think 主观性太强,建议改为in my view/point of view,/As far as i am concerned,就我看来．
另外,你的论证绝对　有问题,我写一篇．．
Recently,according to the news report,many student who are studying in middle school rarely do housework at home.Among parents and teachers various oponions vary widely on whether a middle school student should do housework or not.
A large proportion of parents and teachers hold that children's current vital mission is to study the schoolwork well so that they can get ahead in a growing tight competition surrondings.The rest of them think it necessary for students to engage in several houseworks.Only by doing that,a student can grow up to be mature and independent.Knowledge itself includes two aspects which separately derive from books and life.The two sort of knowledge is not incompatible,but mutually dependent and reinforcing.
As far as i am concerned ,there is pretty much need for us as a student to do housework ,after all,it gives us a chance to testify our knowledge learning from our textbooks and also help work out our body.So we should strive to find a balance point between them.In this way can we both study well and boast a good body.

（你是大城市人，你写的是印刷体）
我觉得每一句的句子太长
毕竟英语不能像语文一样句子连贯。
总体来说写的不错情节蛮好

没有语法错误，老师给你12分是因为内容和文采吧

teachers said 时态错误