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There was a terrible earthquake.Many students can not go to school because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their homes and lives.We all feel sad.We should do something as much as possible to help them.We can raise money to them and sent food drinks and tents to them.We should give them warmth.
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tianxiang2046 幼苗

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It was a terrible earthquake.Many students can not go to school ,because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their homes and lives.We all felt sad.We should do somethings as many as possible to help them.We could raise money to them and sent foods and drinks and tents to them.We should give them warmth.

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h395904239 幼苗

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right

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玥玡儿 幼苗

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倒数第二行的 "we can raise money to them" 改为”we can raise money for them"

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dynastyknight 幼苗

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There was a terrible earthquake. Many students can not go to school because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their houses and lives.We all feel sad.We should do something as much as possible to help them.We can dominate money to them and send food drinks and tents to them. We should give them warmth.

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星巴巴克 幼苗

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There was a terrible earthquake. Many students can not go to school because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their homes and lives.We all feel sad.We should do something as much a...

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