跪求各路英语达人帮小女子我看下本人的英语有没有语法错误.小女子这厢谢过了.

跪求各路英语达人帮小女子我看下本人的英语有没有语法错误.小女子这厢谢过了.
Self-introduction Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview.i Would like to answer whatever you may raise.and I hope I can make a good( performance) today First I will introduce myself briefly. my name is xx, I am 23 years old, born in small town Jiangxi Province and Fuzhou City, I read in Jiang Xi Police university for three years . during my university, In addition to my professional courses, I have study a comparative good command of network application I m a cheerful girl, love to laugh, beause I think love laughing girl not bad luck .I have lots of interest, such as reading , running and so on My work experience let me know, that no matter what kind of work , you need to put more responsibity and patience to finish . so I believe I can fit for this job and do it well. finally , i think of anything to be in a serious and responsible attitude to do .just give me a chance ,I will paly my best work hard. Thank you