求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方

求英语达人帮我看看我写的这段话有没有语法错误,还有有没有修改的地方
yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So.i think it is better that you just forget all about me.I hope that you will find a good guy who is really love you and makes you happy.
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lm琴麻岛小咕噜 花朵

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yea,I admit that I‘m a bad guy,a little bird without feet.So forget all about me.I hope that you can find a good guy who really loves you and makes you happy.

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xfghbfn 幼苗

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其它的不用改，没什么语法错误，只要最后一句who is really love........改成who really loves就可以了，其它的译得比较好了，加油。

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张剑平2007 幼苗

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yea, i admit that i'm a bad guy and just like a little bird without feet(?你要表达什么意思什么意思) so, i thingk it will be better if you just forget all about me. i hope that you will find a good boy who really loves you and makes you happy.

1年前

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方故意 幼苗

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写的可以，各种语法用的都比较精确

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