求英语高手修改作文!My birthday on the next week.I will invite my frie

求英语高手修改作文!
My birthday on the next week.I will invite my friends and my brother.Iwill buy a new robot toy.My mother is going to make a cake for me.My friends called me.They will buy some gifts.We is going to sing and dance in my home.At last,We will go to the park.
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az1d 春芽

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ID天使宝贝的第四句语法有误,应该是My friends told me that they would buy some gifts for me.主句一般过去时,宾语从句应该是过去相应时态,也就是过去将来时

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寂廖夜雨 幼苗

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in the next week7
my friend call me7
we are going to sing

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CRSTD 幼苗

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下个星期是我的生日,我会邀请我的哥哥和姐姐。我将会去买一个小玩具,妈妈给我做了一个蛋糕,我的朋友打电话给我,他们会给我买一些礼物。我们在家里举办了舞会,最后我们将要去野营。

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ytyhdhghgh 幼苗

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亲爱的,你语法要加强哦
My birthday is on the next week.I will invite my friends and my brother to celebrate it. Buying a new robot toy, I will get a cake from my mum. My friends told me that they will buy so...

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天天的天下 幼苗

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请问你是几年级。。?

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