求英语高手修改作文!In the morning,I got up at seven o' clock.I ate Zo

求英语高手修改作文!
In the morning,I got up at seven o' clock.I ate Zombi and a bowl of milk.Then,I went to English teacher's house by bus.But,English teacher had gone go to school.So,I come back home.
In the evening,my father with I played tennis on the playground.
zhanghuawu 1年前 已收到7个回答 举报

szszpeng 花朵

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把时间放在开头的句子是典型的中国式英语.
牛奶不能用吃的,要用喝的
the english teacher
but后不用逗号
but 后的english teacher 应该用he 或she 代替,此处重复
has gone to school
went back home

1年前

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红署片 幼苗

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Zombi?牛奶用喝,drink ,go去掉,come 改成came, with 改成 and,on 改成 in the playground;典型的中式英语,加油吧!

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iz1234 幼苗

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I took bus to my English teacher 's house while 或however my teacher had gone to school.I had no choice but to go back

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tellmeyang 幼苗

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In the morning, I got up at seven o' clock.I ate Zombi and a bowl of milk.Then, I went to the English teacher's house by bus.But, my English teacher had gone to school.So, I came back home. In the evening, my father and I played tennis on the playground.

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ljwg617 幼苗

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Zombi??

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MamaQ 幼苗

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In the morning, I got up at seven o' clock.I ate XXX and drank a bottle milk. Then, I went to English teacher's house by bus.But, English teacher has gone to school.So, I came back home.

In the evening, my father with I played tennis on the playground.

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llyz 幼苗

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But, English teacher had gone to school.So, I came back home.
In the evening, my father and I played tennis on the playground.

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