跪求英语达人修改作文,特别是语法,
跪求英语达人修改作文,特别是语法,
Time goes by,there are two months that we will graduate from the senior high school.Students are planning to do something meaningful.After a heated discussion,students reached a conclusion that planting trees on the campus is the best.The advantages are listed as follow.s
To begin with,some students want to send some modern facilities to the school,but those kinds of things may be easily damaged if they are not used carefully,while trees can live long,people needn’t spend too much time and energy on them.
Secondly,planting trees can improve school’s environment.The terrible environment may make students upset and they will perform badly in study.
What’s more,trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.Enough oxygen is good to students’ brain.
Last but not least,trees are good at soundproof.Many schools are located next to the roads and the noise of the traffic will disturb students.
On the whole ,planting trees on the campus has a lot of advantages.It’s a meaningful thing to do for our school.
Time goes by,there are two months that we will graduate from the senior high school.Students are planning to do something meaningful.After a heated discussion,students reached a conclusion that planting trees on the campus is the best.The advantages are listed as follow.s
To begin with,some students want to send some modern facilities to the school,but those kinds of things may be easily damaged if they are not used carefully,while trees can live long,people needn’t spend too much time and energy on them.
Secondly,planting trees can improve school’s environment.The terrible environment may make students upset and they will perform badly in study.
What’s more,trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.Enough oxygen is good to students’ brain.
Last but not least,trees are good at soundproof.Many schools are located next to the roads and the noise of the traffic will disturb students.
On the whole ,planting trees on the campus has a lot of advantages.It’s a meaningful thing to do for our school.
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As time goes by,there are two months before we will graduate from the senior high school.Students are planning to do something meaningful.After a heated discussion,students reached a conclusion that planting trees on the campus is the best.The advantages are listed as follow.s
To begin with,some students want to send some modern facilities to the school,but those kinds of things may be easily damaged if they are not used carefully,trees can live long,so people needn’t spend too much time and energy on them.
Secondly,planting trees can improve school’s environment.The bad environment may make students upset and they will perform badly in study.
What’s more,trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.Enough oxygen is good to students’ brain.
Last but not least,many schools are located next to the roads and the noise of the traffic will disturb students,and trees are good at soundproof.
On the whole ,planting trees on the campus has a lot of advantages.It’s a meaningful thing to do for our school.
To begin with,some students want to send some modern facilities to the school,but those kinds of things may be easily damaged if they are not used carefully,trees can live long,so people needn’t spend too much time and energy on them.
Secondly,planting trees can improve school’s environment.The bad environment may make students upset and they will perform badly in study.
What’s more,trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.Enough oxygen is good to students’ brain.
Last but not least,many schools are located next to the roads and the noise of the traffic will disturb students,and trees are good at soundproof.
On the whole ,planting trees on the campus has a lot of advantages.It’s a meaningful thing to do for our school.
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