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On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man (去掉to) get on with his grandson. He was carrying the (boy改成boy's) schoolbag and violin. I offered my (seats改成seat) to the old man at once. (Therefore改成However), the boy sat down first. The old man (has改成had) to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to (her改成his) grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle (over改成on) the bus. When I saw this, I got (much改成very/most) angry. I think the boy should (加入not) only respect and take care of the old man but also keep (an改成the) environment clean.
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