短文改错 10处错误!I'd like to telling you something about my hometo

短文改错 10处错误!
I'd like to telling you something about my hometown Zhengzhou.The city stood on the bank of the Yellow River.It is the besutiful place for people to live in.Iis economy has been developing rapid in the past ten years.New factories,houses and roads have built.Many schools and hospitals have been built for its people.Therefore,there are still some problem ,such as air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.On my opinion ,Zhengzhou should be brought under control so that we'll have a more better hometown in the future
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五月花号契约 幼苗

共回答了8个问题采纳率:100% 举报

telling - tell
stood - stands
to live in - to live
it's the besutiful place - it's a besutiful place
Iis(its) economy has been developing(developped) rapid(ly) in the past ten years.
New factories,houses and roads have (been) built
there are still some problem(s)
On(In) my opinion
Zhengzhou should be brought (bring) under control

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dd上海篮球队 幼苗

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telling→tell
on→beside
in不要
其余的自己做

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tonghaimayi 幼苗

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I'd like to telling(tell) you something about my hometown Zhengzhou. The city stood(stands)on the bank of the Yellow River. It is the (a)besutiful place for people to live in. Iis economy has be...

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薇鲜的鱼 花朵

共回答了1202个问题采纳率:1.1% 举报

更正在括号处标出,保证准确率!
只能找到九处错误,怀疑楼主没有打完整或打错题目,因为本来就有很多打错的单词,而且最后一句话中的前面的主句感觉非常生硬别扭。
I'd like to (telling改成tell) you something about my hometown Zhengzhou. The city (stood改成stands) on the bank of t...

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