英语短文改错10处In autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was trav
英语短文改错10处
In autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.An evening,after hunt in the forest all day,I was returning to the place that I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,but I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees.What can I do?Should I jump into the river to save my live?Then I looked at the right.In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide open.
In autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.An evening,after hunt in the forest all day,I was returning to the place that I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,but I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees.What can I do?Should I jump into the river to save my live?Then I looked at the right.In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide open.
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In (加入the) autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.(One) evening,after (hunting) in the forest all day,I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,(and) I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees.What (could) I do?Should I jump into the river to save my life?Then I looked (to) the right.In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (去掉was) wide open.
另：save my live是不是save my life的错打?
In (加入the) autumn of 1985,when I was a young man,I was traveling in the north of India.(One) evening,after (hunting) in the forest all day,I was returning to the place (where) I had put up my tent.It was getting dark,(and) I was walking along a road.Suddenly I saw two eye glaring at me from (between) the trees.What (could) I do?Should I jump into the river to save my life?Then I looked (to) the right.In the river there (was) a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth (去掉was) wide open.
另：save my live是不是save my life的错打?
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