请帮我改一下下面一段话的语病,必要时,把单词或句子换了都可以,

请帮我改一下下面一段话的语病,必要时,把单词或句子换了都可以,
Marry Christmas Super Christmas!Superman,Harry Potter even you and I am all here to marry Christmas!Marry Chrismas To You!Here,I'd like to thank the following three:Firechildc; saucejenkins; without whom I could never make this video.They teached me how to do it!Nerdmanreturns; When I finish this video,I only know that I have paid so much effort and energy that I never expectet before,nerly going to die.but he,Nerdmanreturns,promeised me to do the video for a Chinese person that he never met before.I am grateful to him so much,I would like to dedicate my greatest blessing to him.Last,marry Christmas to you!
那我不是错的更惨了?我开始在视频中误将Christmas少写了一个t,现在连Merry 也错了,好丢人哦
其实那个视频是我花了很大心血才做好的。看看吧
给你加了十分!
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把merry(快乐)都写成marry(结婚).
Merry Christmas!
Super Christmas!
Superman,Harry Potter,as well as you and me all get together here to celebrate the Christmas day!
Merry Chrismas To You!
Here I'd like to give my thanks to the following three boddies:Firechildc,Saucejenkins and Nerdmanreturns.First two taught me how to make a video.Without them I could never finish this job.Nerdmanreturns promised to do a video for me,a Chinese boy/girl he'd never met before.It took us so much effort and energy that I've never expected before.I'd like to dedicate my greatest blessing to him.
Merry Christmas to you again!

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