请各位好心人帮我改一下这一段的语法把,这一篇对我来说十分重要,我是生是死就靠它了

请各位好心人帮我改一下这一段的语法把,这一篇对我来说十分重要,我是生是死就靠它了
Over many centuries,humans always tend to change the environment to meet their needs by creating numerous kinds of technology; in other words,technology emerges when humans desire to change their surroundings.Interestingly,although Carson and Gould are both concerned about the interaction between the technology and the environment changes,their attitudes about how the technology effect on environment are different.In Carson’s aspect,DDT is the technology,which produces pollution problem in the soils and air and cause the environment unnatural.She illustrates that humans’ technology such as DDT is the head of the environment change,makes environment change.In Gould’s aspect,the appearance of AIDS is the change in the environment,which is too strong to be overcome even with technology.Thus,his attitude is more tolerate about the change,that the occurrence of AIDS is a natural phenomenon,which seems all technology has become useless in the front of the nature.