请英语好的各位帮我改一下这几句话...

请英语好的各位帮我改一下这几句话...
There are lots of people who suffering from a curless illness.Some of them wish to use euthanasia to escape from pain,but unfortunately,euthanasia is still illegal in many countries.This essay will discuss about why should euthanasia be legal.
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梅川内帅 幼苗

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There are a lot of people,suffering from a curless illness,try to use Euthanasia to prevent the pain.Unfortuantely,Euthanasia is still illegal in many countries.This essay will make a discussion about the essential of Euthanasia should be legal.

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散落的愁绪 幼苗

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There are lots of people ** suffering from ** curless illness. (秃发症应该有专门的英语名称吧,否则显得你太外行了) Some of them wish to use euthanasia to escape from *(prevent)* *the* pain, but unfortunately, euthanasia is st...

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BLACK_NEW_NEW 幼苗

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1.“who suffering”在suffering 前面加are
2.拼写错误:cureless
3.“why should euthanasia”语序错误,应该是"why euthanasia should belegal."
4.最后一句太chinglish了。
we'll discuss sth in this essay.或者最后根本不该这么写。直接写需...

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jainwal 幼苗

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我先把正确的打出来:
There are lots of people suffering from incurable diaeases. Some of them wish to use euthanasia to escape the pain, but unfortunately, euthanasia is still illegal in many countries.This...

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