帮我修改我的英文的自我介绍(简单, Hello,everybody! my name is Nancy. Nice to meet you! I like reading books and listening to music. My favorite writer is Victor Hugo. And my favorite singer is Lady Gaga. I like “boys boys boys”very much. I often listen to it when I boring or sad. Please tell something about your favorite!
music前要加the like reading books 问题不大,去掉更口语,不去给人你只喜欢看书,不喜欢杂志报纸之类的感觉 My favorite writer is Victor Hugo. And my favorite singer is Lady Gaga. I like “boys boys boys”very much. 是完全没有问题的句子,喜欢Lady Gaga,很爱她的 “boys boys boys” I boring or sad 应该成I'm bored or sad,boring不能指自己的感觉 tell后面加me,favorite变复数 BTW I like Lady Gaga,too,and my favorites are "just dance" and "Paparazzi"
Hello,everybody! My name is Nancy. Nice to meet you! I like reading books and listening to music. My favorite writer is Victor Hugo. And my favorite singer is Lady Gaga. I like...
like reading,把books去掉,要不然意思就重复了。后两句话读起来有点重复,可以适当变化下位置,比如说后一句你可以说Lady Gaga is my ...I love the song"boys boys boys" 后一句语法错误了,I often listen to it when feeling boring or sad.