帮我修改我的英文的自我介绍(简单,

帮我修改我的英文的自我介绍(简单,
Hello,everybody!
my name is Nancy.
Nice to meet you!
I like reading books and listening to music.
My favorite writer is Victor Hugo.
And my favorite singer is Lady Gaga.
I like “boys boys boys”very much.
I often listen to it when I boring or sad.
Please tell something about your favorite!
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mandy1204 春芽

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music前要加the
like reading books 问题不大,去掉更口语,不去给人你只喜欢看书,不喜欢杂志报纸之类的感觉
My favorite writer is Victor Hugo.
And my favorite singer is Lady Gaga.
I like “boys boys boys”very much.
是完全没有问题的句子,喜欢Lady Gaga,很爱她的 “boys boys boys”
I boring or sad 应该成I'm bored or sad,boring不能指自己的感觉
tell后面加me,favorite变复数
BTW I like Lady Gaga,too,and my favorites are "just dance" and "Paparazzi"

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xy2056686 幼苗

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一定在社交网写的自我介绍吧
I often listen to it when boring or sad.

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沃鼎 幼苗

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Hello,everybody!
My name is Nancy.
Nice to meet you!
I like reading books and listening to music.
My favorite writer is Victor Hugo.
And my favorite singer is Lady Gaga.
I like...

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法法2005 幼苗

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I often listen to it when I feel boring or sad.

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淼淼天空 幼苗

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like reading,把books去掉,要不然意思就重复了。后两句话读起来有点重复,可以适当变化下位置,比如说后一句你可以说Lady Gaga is my ...I love the song"boys boys boys"
后一句语法错误了,I often listen to it when feeling boring or sad.

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