浅浅泪儿
幼苗
共回答了14个问题采纳率:92.9% 举报
"Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed him up."
改为:"Having walked only a few yards,he was swallowed up by the mist."
"So,feeling his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face."
改为:"So,feeling his way along the fence,he was lashed in face by a twig."
"Hurrying forward,and they pursued."
改为:"He hurried forward,they pursued."
"burst into laughers " 中的"laughers"改为"laughters"
总之,这篇文章里最主要的错误就是动名词的主语不匹配,至于其他地方是否要加冠词,就看楼主你要做的这道题有没有一行一行对应的空(像英语考试里的改错题那样)来判断了~
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