帮忙找出错误的句子纠正.It was his first day in the mountains that winte

帮忙找出错误的句子纠正.
It was his first day in the mountains that winter.The mist was thickening as darkness fell.Being only a five-minute walk to the village,there was no reason to feel afraid.He picked up his shopping basket and left the house.Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed him up.So,feeling his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face.Then he heard heavy footsteps moving behind him.He stopped and they stopped.Hurrying forward,they pursued.He found himself in a suffocating world with a feeling of helplessness and blindness.He turned back suddenly,and burst into laughers ---- there were several hares!
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"Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed him up."
改为:"Having walked only a few yards,he was swallowed up by the mist."
"So,feeling his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face."
改为:"So,feeling his way along the fence,he was lashed in face by a twig."
"Hurrying forward,and they pursued."
改为:"He hurried forward,they pursued."
"burst into laughers " 中的"laughers"改为"laughters"
总之,这篇文章里最主要的错误就是动名词的主语不匹配,至于其他地方是否要加冠词,就看楼主你要做的这道题有没有一行一行对应的空(像英语考试里的改错题那样)来判断了~

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