帮忙找出错误的句子纠正.It was his first day in the mountains that winte

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It was his first day in the mountains that winter.The mist was thickening as darkness fell.Being only a five-minute walk to the village,there was no reason to feel afraid.He picked up his shopping basket and left the house.Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed him up.So,feeling his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face.Then he heard heavy footsteps moving behind him.He stopped and they stopped.Hurrying forward,they pursued.He found himself in a suffocating world with a feeling of helplessness and blindness.He turned back suddenly,and burst into laughers ---- there were several hares!
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1,Being only a five-minute walk to the village,there was no reason to feel afraid.改为Since it is only a five-minute walk to the village,there was no reason to feel afraid.
2,Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed him up.改为Having walked only a few yards,he was swallowed up by the mist.
3,So,feeling his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face.改为When he was feeling his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face.
4,Hurrying forward,they pursued.改为He hurried forward,but they pursued him.(to pursue sb.)

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