帮忙修改一篇读写任务的英语写作.满分25分,请打一个分数并能指出语法和用词错误`谢谢``!
帮忙修改一篇读写任务的英语写作.满分25分,请打一个分数并能指出语法和用词错误`谢谢``!
I was move when I finished reading this story SUN her kindness and patient as like a angel live in her classmate ' s heart.what she had done for her classmate ZhangQing is beyong the value of friengship .
I am favour of helping other .Because hleping is a happy thing that make me realize the value of life .we help more people ,themore will get the happiness .
If we do,the world will full with happiness and joys
I was move when I finished reading this story SUN her kindness and patient as like a angel live in her classmate ' s heart.what she had done for her classmate ZhangQing is beyong the value of friengship .
I am favour of helping other .Because hleping is a happy thing that make me realize the value of life .we help more people ,themore will get the happiness .
If we do,the world will full with happiness and joys
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I was move(改为:moved) when I finished reading this story SUN her (不明白)kindness and patient as like(删去) a angel live in her classmate ' s heart. What(大写) she had done for her classmate ZhangQing is(was要同一时态) beyong the value of friengship .
I am favour of helping other .Because hleping is a happy thing that make me realize the value of life .we (大写)help more people ,the more will get the happiness .(改为:the more happier will get.If we do,the world will full with happiness and joys
应该只有10分吧~我们的读写任务都要求要长一些,并且这篇文章一开头就错~所以不能拿高分哦~
I am favour of helping other .Because hleping is a happy thing that make me realize the value of life .we (大写)help more people ,the more will get the happiness .(改为:the more happier will get.If we do,the world will full with happiness and joys
应该只有10分吧~我们的读写任务都要求要长一些,并且这篇文章一开头就错~所以不能拿高分哦~
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