请帮忙修改作文,Chinese family in the way of life has changed a lot

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Chinese family in the way of life has changed a lot in the recent thirly years.There changes are difficult to imagine.
M一parents always tell to me that they lived a hard life when they were child.They do not have enough food to eat every althought how desire they were.So they were so cherish all food.What's more,they had to work all the day and no time to play.Because of have not too many clothes,they had to wear it many day.
Compare today's life with past's life,there is no doubt that there have a great change.Nowadays we don't have to dos so much housework,so we have more time to play.We are comsidered not only to eat fullful,but also pay attention to the problems of health.
Due to the development of China,most of us are living better and better.And I am sure that China will to be better and better.
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海域天使 幼苗

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they had to work all the day (so they)no time to play
Because of( have去掉) not too many clothes,they
there is no doubt that (there改为 they are) have a great change

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