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英语牛人都来!总觉得自己的作文跟范文不太一样,心里没底,请帮忙修改六级作文,顺便给个分,
My view on lecture on campus
There is on denying the fact that there are many lectures on our campus.They can be mainly divided into two groups:lectures on professional knowlegde,on job seeking,even dating and love.Actually,colourful lectures have gained increaing popularity among college students.
Althoug lectures supply us with many advantages,they also have some defects which can't be neglected.In the first place,some lectures which are not impratice for college students may cost them too much time,and distract them from study.In the second place,Exposed to seas of knowledge,college students may lost their orientation,even don't know their priority.
As far as I'm concerned,I believe lectures on campus are helpful to us.As college student,study is our priority.If we still have extra energy after mastering our school work ,we should learn more knowledge from lectures ,Only in this way,can we become a all-sided student.
第一行 打错了 应该是 no denying
围巾和围脖 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

战姜 幼苗

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My point of view of lecture on campus
There is on denying the fact that there are many lectures on our campus.They can be mainly divided into three groups:lectures on professional knowledge ,on job seeking ,even dating and love .Actually,colorful lectures have gained increasing popularity among college students.
Although lectures supply us with many advantages ,they also have some defects which can't be neglected.In the first place,some lectures which don’t make sense for college students may cost them too much time,and distract them from study.In the second place,it exposed to seas of knowledge,college students may lost their orientation,even don't know their priority.
As far as I'm concerned,I believe lectures on campus are helpful to us.As college students,study is our priority.If we still have extra energy after mastering our school work ,we should learn more knowledge from lectures ,Only in this way,can we become a all-sided student.

1年前 追问

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举报 战姜

帮你改了啊

围巾和围脖 举报

it exposed to seas of knowledge, college students may lost their orientation, even don't know their priority. 这句为什么加个it?

举报 战姜

sorry,看错了,不用加it

围巾和围脖 举报

不好意思请问你改了哪里 我真的没看出来

举报 战姜

My (point of view) of lecture on campus There is on denying the fact that there are many lectures on our campus. They can be mainly divided into (three) groups:lectures on professional knowledge , on job seeking , even dating and love . Actually, (colorful) lectures have gained increasing popularity among college students. (Although) lectures supply us with many advantages , they also have some defects which can't be neglected. In the first place, some lectures which (don’t make sense for) college students may cost them too much time, and distract them from study. In the second place, exposed to (the sea) of knowledge, college students may lost their orientation, even don't know their priority. As far as I'm concerned, I believe lectures on campus are helpful to us. As college students, study is our priority. If we still have extra energy after mastering our school work, we should learn more knowledge from lectures, only in this way, can we become a all-sided (students).

hello23 幼苗

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我比较敏感,对于英语这方面还是挺开通滴。觉得有点不大对劲吧。

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天使在吃饭 幼苗

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My point of view of lecture on campus There is on denying the fact that there are many lectures on our campus. They can be mainly divided

1年前

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zhongxj1988 幼苗

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还可以

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