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第1个句子改为:
If evidence shows that ...
evidence shows "证据表明",其中evidence 是不可数名词,相当于information,且是泛指的,故不用定冠词the
第2个句子改为:
..,making riding a bicycle on the road dangerous
make sth.+ 形容词(作宾补),所以删除become;riding bicycle 之间应该有不定冠词a
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make是表语吗? 楼下有人改为the number of cars has doubled in the past ten years, which has made riding bicycles on the road become dangerous. 这里的become要去掉吗
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make 不是表语。 在句子中,making 表述伴随,后面跟宾语riding a bicycle,然后是宾补dangerous
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楼下有人改为the number of cars has doubled in the past ten years, which has made riding bicycles on the road become dangerous. 这里的become要去掉吗
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which has made = making,但书面表达以简洁为原则,所以 making 更好。 become 属于多余。例如: We are trying to make our country more beautiful. 在more之前可以加上become,但是实际上没有必要。