范小宝
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整体上看写的很不错,只有一些小毛病需商榷,Computers can be seen everywhere and software has been(改成softwares have been)This system is designed and implemented to meet needs (改成the needs) of small and medium-sizedsuper markets to cope with (最好改成in coping with) the complexity(complexities复杂性应用复数) and low efficiency of the supermarket management(the宜去掉,非特指,泛指超市管理). Functionsof this system include purchasing, inventory, sales and information management and(改成of) supermarkets .希望能有所帮助,谢谢!
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