高手帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么错误?

高手帮我看看这篇英语文章有什么错误?
最好包括语法、单词拼写、惯用表达法.
The failure is not terrible,but millions of failures we misrealize is terrible.
The failure will result in succeeding.We can realize disadvantages from failures.We can get energy from failures.We can become more stronger from failures.Then we will approach the succeed nearly one step.
The failure can make us ripe.Face the dream lost,we can choose persistence or sorrow.Can we sorrow in the whole life?No,that's not intelligence.What can we choose is only persistence.Then we'll be succeed.Finally,we can understand that succeed just the way to learn how to become ripe!
Words mean nothing.Action means everything.Desire to succeed?Then ACTION.