sammigirl
幼苗
共回答了26个问题采纳率:92.3% 举报
line 1:"Wall E helps",定于从句先行词在从句中作主语,应有关系代词“who”.
line 2:非线性定性定于从句,想说电影好几次让我的眼睛湿润了,应该在which前面加上逗号.同时建议把句式改为“Wall E,a fantastic film which wets my eyes several times,talks about.”
line 3:"developed"换为“illustrated”
line 3:"tend"换为“prefer”"describe...as..."."unlike"换为“rather than”.
line 5:"enjoy.long long time",改为“enjoy his life through constantly cleaning.”
line 5:"meet"改为“meet with”
line 7:"inspired by adoration"改为,“In great adoration of eva”
line 9:"And they finally belong together with a fairy ending"改为“Finally,the story came to a happy ending which saw their engagement.”
line 13:".I cant help sheding tears It may be sort of sentimental"改为“It may be sort of sentimental,however,i cant help sheding tears.”
line 14:去掉but,"give impact to"改为“have impact on”
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