帮我修改一篇英语文章(150words) 12月21日截至

帮我修改一篇英语文章(150words) 12月21日截至
要求:
1 修正语法错误
2 不合适的词帮忙换掉
3 改写某些啰嗦的语句
4 最好用一些高级语法
原文如下:
I think I am smart
I think I'm smart,this opinion I'm keeping since I was young.
In my primary school-time,our classmates always play more funny with me,because I usually had some special ideas.I was naughty when young.But in class,I was a good student.Many questions teachers asked,no one but me could answered.So I thought I'm smart at that time.
As time goes,now I have become a collage student,my childishness has fade away.I know I just was a little clever ago,not intelligence.
To be a intelligent man,I study hard,not only in class,but also by reading books about history,politics and psychology and so on.Though these methods,Ihave made some improvement.
I think I'm smart,but not just a thinking,I'll be!
我大二的
最晚明天下午截稿
有满意的会提前截至
为了公平 内容相似的 我会给先发表的人
第3位高手的方案,感觉很好,再等一会 ,没有更优秀的就给他了
I believe that I'm a smart since I was a little boy,I
earn talent in many different fields.
when I was in primary school,no doubt,I was the best
student.Children in the same age often surrounded me
result in I had so many special ideas which were full of
imagination,what's more,in the class ,I was my
teacher's favourite,when the problem which no one else
could answer came to me ,it became easy!
As time went on,I become more and more mature.I wake
up to the truth that there is no intelligence on me.I
must work hard to be a intelligent man!
fortunately,though the years of study both in class and
out of class,everyday's reading books about
history,politics,and psychology,I have made some
improvement!
It's not a dream that I'm smart,I will make it
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I believe that I'm a smart since I was a little boy,I earn talent in many different fields.
when I was in primary school, no doubt,I was the best student.Children in the same age often surrounded me result in I had so many special ideas which were full of imagination,what's more, in the class ,I was my teacher's favourite,when the problem which no one else could answer came to me ,it became easy!
As time went on, I become more and more mature. I wake up to the truth that there is no intelligence on me. I must work hard to be a intelligent man!
fortunately, though the years of study both in class and out of class,everyday's reading books about history,politics,and psychology, I have made some improvement!
It's not a dream that I'm smart, I will make it !

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