帮忙看一下这篇初一英语作文有没有语法错误
帮忙看一下这篇初一英语作文有没有语法错误
I want to be
Everyone has his dream,some want to be a teacher ,some want to be a doctor.As for me ,I want to be a writer.
I often do some reading.I think the articles of the writers are so wonderful.So I try writing in my free time.Then I find me writing can let me happy.I can write my imagination,my idea or my story in my articles.
In a word ,I want to be a writer in the future.
我觉得中间的时态可能有点问题,以及then I find…… 那里可能也有句式不对的地方.