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Friendship plays an important role in ourlife. But to me, Jack is what “friend” means to me. Jack is middle height,thin. However, he is always ready to do anything he can to help his friends.
Once a bike speed up so fast that the ridercan’t help himself when it hurts me. I injured pretty badly and I was not ableto walk. At this time, Jack rushed to me and, with a great power I have no ideawhere it come from, he carried me to the clinic! From his red face and heavy breathe,I know he pushed himself to help me.
From Jack I finally understand what “a friendin need is a friend indeed” means. I will always be ready to help others justlike him.
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ut Jack is what the word---friend means to me
Jack is of middle height and he is thin
oncs a bike speeded so fast that the rider couldn't help himself but to heart me
Jack rushed to me with great power
I had no idea where the bike came from
I wish I can always ......太多了。。。眼晕啊,亲,注意时态统一,不要chinglish

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