短文改错On my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages in
短文改错
On my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages in traveling both by plane and by train .travel by plane is time-saving ,comfortably,and you can have good rest on the trip ,but it is too expensive and quite safety and you can appreciate the beautiful scenery on both side of the railway .however,it’s was too crowed and time-wasting,and you can have a good rest .so you can see that every coin has two sides .you'd better to choose either of them depending on your own interest or economy
On my opinion,there are advantages and disadvantages in traveling both by plane and by train .travel by plane is time-saving ,comfortably,and you can have good rest on the trip ,but it is too expensive and quite safety and you can appreciate the beautiful scenery on both side of the railway .however,it’s was too crowed and time-wasting,and you can have a good rest .so you can see that every coin has two sides .you'd better to choose either of them depending on your own interest or economy
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不知道楼主怎么回事,文中坐火车/飞机好像完全搞反了!叫人怎么改啊?
1.On my opinion → In my opinion
2.Travel by plane is → Traveling by plane is
3.comfortably → comfortable
4.can have good rest → can have a good rest
5.quite safely → quite dangerous
6.and you can appreciate → and you can't appreciate
7.on both side → on each/either side 或 on both sides
8.it was → it is
9.you can have → you can't/cannot have
10.you'd better to → you'd bette
1.On my opinion → In my opinion
2.Travel by plane is → Traveling by plane is
3.comfortably → comfortable
4.can have good rest → can have a good rest
5.quite safely → quite dangerous
6.and you can appreciate → and you can't appreciate
7.on both side → on each/either side 或 on both sides
8.it was → it is
9.you can have → you can't/cannot have
10.you'd better to → you'd bette
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