帮我修改英语日记Today is the first day of the summer holiday.I was h

帮我修改英语日记
Today is the first day of the summer holiday.I was happy at that time.But all of teacher said :"It's important to study in this summer holidady.So I comeover some of subjects ,such as,Chinese,maths,Englishi and so on.And I want to improve my computer skill,while I must do my homework.However today is hard and tired,but I was happy because I have havrested knowledge and experience.Then I chat with my friends at night,sharing happiness and sorrpw of today .Finally I was sleepy,with having a great time of today.
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sag秋 幼苗

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Today is the first day of the summer holiday.I am very happy.But all teachers say :"It's important to study in this summer holidady." So I am going to come over some subjects ,such as Chinese,maths,Englishi and so on.And I want to improve my computer skill,while I must do my homework.Although today I am tired I am very happy because I have havrested knowledge and experience.Then I chat with my friends at night,sharing happiness and sorrow of today .Finally I am sleepy.I hope I can have a good dream.

1年前

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zhaojing112 幼苗

共回答了6个问题 举报

But all of teacher said
应该是teachers..all of 后面的可数名词应该用复数~
后面such as …English拼错了
时态:好几次过去是都没有注意...
finally I went to bad 好一些...

1年前

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花风云 幼苗

共回答了15个问题 举报

1."I was happy at that time" 中that time是那个时候,这里不能用的。
I was very happy.就好了
2."But all of teacher said" 应该是teachers, all of 后面的可数名词应该用复数
3. such as和and so on用一个就够了
4.while改为but
5.mu...

1年前

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掐狗儿 幼苗

共回答了10个问题 举报

改后为:
Today......I was happy at that time,however all of my teachers were emphasizing the importance of time managing for the summer.So I decided to improve some of my subjects such as....
改不下去...

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