帮我修改英语做文?(用过去时哦)!
帮我修改英语做文?(用过去时哦)!
Today it'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today!Visit how creat milk.The baby cow eat grass and drink milk.We are went fishing and fly kites.They are excited.In the afternoon,we eat lunch.then we go to the shui shang le yuan.We are catching many catch loachs.The we are drive cars.We are very happy!
Today it'sunny day.We went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan today!Visit how creat milk.The baby cow eat grass and drink milk.We are went fishing and fly kites.They are excited.In the afternoon,we eat lunch.then we go to the shui shang le yuan.We are catching many catch loachs.The we are drive cars.We are very happy!
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Today it'sunny day.I went to Guang ming nong chang with shui shang le yuan!We visited milk farm and saw how to make milk.The baby cow ate grass and drank milk.We went fishing and flying kites.They were excited.In the afternoon,we had lunch.then we went to the shui shang le yuan.We caught many loachs.Then we drove cars.We were very happy!
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