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My mother was used to be a worker in a car factory.She worked very hard,and because of the poor management in the factory ,she has to leave his job two years ago,where she had worked for more than 20 years.To help supporting the family she tried her best to find job.After a few months she finally got a job for a bus conductor on a long-distance bus.Every morning,she goes to work at 6:30 and returns back at 10in the evening.I know she is very tiried after a day's work.But she never talks about them.To show my love,I study hard at school.
My mother was used to be a worker in a car factory.She worked very hard,and because of the poor management in the factory ,she has to leave his job two years ago,where she had worked for more than 20 years.To help supporting the family she tried her best to find job.After a few months she finally got a job for a bus conductor on a long-distance bus.Every morning,she goes to work at 6:30 and returns back at 10in the evening.I know she is very tiried after a day's work.But she never talks about them.To show my love,I study hard at school.
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My mother was (1去掉was）used to be a worker in a car factory.She worked very hard,and （2改成but）because of the poor management in the factory,she has （3改成had） to leave his （4改成her）job two years ago where she had worked for more than 20 years.To help supporting （5改成support）the family she tried her best to find （6加a）job.After a few months she finally got a job for （7改成as）a bus conductor on a long-distance bus.Every morning,she goes to work at 6:30 and returns back （8去掉back）at 10 in the evening.I know she is very tired after a day's work.But she never talks about them （9改成it）.To show my love,I study hard at school.
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