求助这篇短文改错 一共10处The temple stands near the city.It dates back

求助这篇短文改错 一共10处
The temple stands near the city.It dates back 1961 and is 50 meters in high.It is one of the most famous temple in the country and about 5000 tourists come to visit every year.
Five years ago,it was decided to repair the temple,but this work was completed last year.The ground floor has been complete pained,and the roof,too.All the rooms have protected from birds by fixing wires through the windows.Trees and flowers have planted in around the temple.We believe,in a few years,the temple will take on new look.
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mark1019 幼苗

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The temple stands near the city.It dates back (加入to) 1961 and is 50 meters in (height).It is one of the most famous (temples) in the country and about 5000 tourists come to visit (加入it) every year.Five years ago,it was decided to repair the temple,(and) this work was completed last year.The ground floor has been (completely) painted,and the roof,too.All the rooms have (加入been) protected from birds by fixing wires through the windows.Trees and flowers have (加入been) planted (去掉in) around the temple.We believe,in a few years,the temple will take on (加入a) new look.

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杨潭 举报

Trees and flowers have (加入been) planted 这一句原文中有been 我忘了打上去了 现在一共9处 还有哪里有错

举报 mark1019

这句错了: All the rooms have (加入been) protected from birds by fixing wires (across) the windows. 即:把through改成across

杨潭 举报

谢谢 不过为什么要用across呢

举报 mark1019

窗户要防鸟进入,是把线缠在窗户表面即可,而不是把线从窗户内部通过。 而across意思是“表面横穿/遍布”,through意思是“从物体内部通过”。

杨潭 举报

谢啦 就用你的答案

zjjysjj 幼苗

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1dates back to
2in hight
3one of the most famous temples
4will come to
5it decided to
6completely pained
7proteceted birds by
8are planted around
9we believe that
10take on a new look

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