帮忙看看这篇短文有没有什么语法问题.这封信的格式对不对.
帮忙看看这篇短文有没有什么语法问题.这封信的格式对不对.
Dear,
Hello,nice to me to.My name is Wudan.I am twelve years old.I am live in a big city,the city's name is Wuxi.Wuxi is beautiful,there are Hundreds of thousands flowers,trees,tall buildings and houses.Do you know where I come from Tell you,I am from Xin'an Elementary school.My school is big.There are a lot of students and teachers in it.These people formed a warm family.
Tell you,I am have some interesting hobbies.They are write essays and draw pictures.Drawing is my the second favourite hobby.Because I of the painting is very beautiful.So I received many awards.The national level I have received the first prize.Write essays is my favorite hobby.Anytime,anywhere,I thought of what is what to write,write real feelings.
Now,China is to hold the most solemn festival-the Spring Festival.What does the holiday mean?The term "pass year" is used for the Spring Festival (Chinese New Year).The word "Year" in Chinese characters used to mean a horrible beast.To combat the beast,the Chinese hang "good luck" wishes on red paper on the door and use fireworks in the belief that the beast fears red and fire.This tradition in many ways resemblethe Western belief of using garlic and crosses to fight vampires.Why New Year is so special?The Chinese zodiac features 12 animals in the sequence of Rat,Ox,Tiger,Rabbit,Dragon,Snake,Horse,Sheep,Monkey,Rooster,Dog,and Pig.This year is the year of Tiger.Each animal represents a different "personality".According to legend,people held a conference with all the animals,informing them that they would pick the 12 to represent the zodiac.However,in spite of being fast,the cat was not picked as its then-close friend,the rat,did not wake it.This action sparked off a rivalrythat continues till this day.What do people do?Eat,eat again,and then eat some more!As the old Chinese saying goes:food is everything.The tradition is to have different main courses everyday from the 1st day of the New Year to the 15th day of the New Year,from Jiao Zi (dumplings),noodles,spring rolls,sticky rice cakes,and Tang Yuan (stuffed rice balls).Besides culinarysatisfaction,each food has a meaning as well:for instance,Jiao Zi looks like gold,implying a wealthy year ahead.Besides eating,young people visit older family members and kids are blessed with a red pack of "lucky" money.And then,people gather and eat again ),leading to a lot of advertisements about fitness right after the Chinese New Year holiday.Although you but this holiday,but I also wish you Happy Chinese New year!
I am really enthusiastic about getting to know you,and I will be glad to get your respond as soon as possible.
Yours,sincerely friend,
Wudan
Dear,
Hello,nice to me to.My name is Wudan.I am twelve years old.I am live in a big city,the city's name is Wuxi.Wuxi is beautiful,there are Hundreds of thousands flowers,trees,tall buildings and houses.Do you know where I come from Tell you,I am from Xin'an Elementary school.My school is big.There are a lot of students and teachers in it.These people formed a warm family.
Tell you,I am have some interesting hobbies.They are write essays and draw pictures.Drawing is my the second favourite hobby.Because I of the painting is very beautiful.So I received many awards.The national level I have received the first prize.Write essays is my favorite hobby.Anytime,anywhere,I thought of what is what to write,write real feelings.
Now,China is to hold the most solemn festival-the Spring Festival.What does the holiday mean?The term "pass year" is used for the Spring Festival (Chinese New Year).The word "Year" in Chinese characters used to mean a horrible beast.To combat the beast,the Chinese hang "good luck" wishes on red paper on the door and use fireworks in the belief that the beast fears red and fire.This tradition in many ways resemblethe Western belief of using garlic and crosses to fight vampires.Why New Year is so special?The Chinese zodiac features 12 animals in the sequence of Rat,Ox,Tiger,Rabbit,Dragon,Snake,Horse,Sheep,Monkey,Rooster,Dog,and Pig.This year is the year of Tiger.Each animal represents a different "personality".According to legend,people held a conference with all the animals,informing them that they would pick the 12 to represent the zodiac.However,in spite of being fast,the cat was not picked as its then-close friend,the rat,did not wake it.This action sparked off a rivalrythat continues till this day.What do people do?Eat,eat again,and then eat some more!As the old Chinese saying goes:food is everything.The tradition is to have different main courses everyday from the 1st day of the New Year to the 15th day of the New Year,from Jiao Zi (dumplings),noodles,spring rolls,sticky rice cakes,and Tang Yuan (stuffed rice balls).Besides culinarysatisfaction,each food has a meaning as well:for instance,Jiao Zi looks like gold,implying a wealthy year ahead.Besides eating,young people visit older family members and kids are blessed with a red pack of "lucky" money.And then,people gather and eat again ),leading to a lot of advertisements about fitness right after the Chinese New Year holiday.Although you but this holiday,but I also wish you Happy Chinese New year!
I am really enthusiastic about getting to know you,and I will be glad to get your respond as soon as possible.
Yours,sincerely friend,
Wudan
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Dear,
Hello,nice to me to.My name is Wudan.I am twelve years old.I live in a big city called Wuxi.Wuxi is beautiful；there are hundreds of thousands of flowers,trees,tall buildings and houses.Do you know where I come from Tell you what,I am from Xin'an Elementary school.My school is big.There are a lot of students and teachers in it.These people formed a warm family.
To tell you the truth,I have some interesting hobbies,such as writing essays and drawing pictures.Writing essays is my favorite hobby.I always write down my true feelings.Drawing is my the second favourite hobby.Because my paintings are very beautiful,I received many awards.I also won the first prize in a national competition.
Now,China is to hold the most important festival-the Spring Festival.What does the festival mean?The term "pass year" is used for the Spring Festival (Chinese New Year's Day).The word "Year" in Chinese characters used to mean a horrible beast.To combat the beast,the Chinese hang "good luck" wishes on red paper on the door and shoot off fireworks,believing that the beast fears red things and fire.This tradition in many ways resembles the Western belief of using garlic and crosses to fight against vampires.Why New Year is so special?The Chinese zodiac features 12 animals in the sequence of Rat,Ox,Tiger,Rabbit,Dragon,Snake,Horse,Sheep,Monkey,Rooster,Dog,and Pig.This year is the year of Tiger.Each animal represents a different "personality".According to legend,people held a conference with all the animals,informing them that they would pick the 12 to represent the zodiac.However,in spite of being fast,the cat was not picked as its then-close friend,the rat,did not wake it up.This action sparked off a rivalry that continues till this day.What do people do during the Spring Festival?Eat,eat again,and then eat some more!As the old Chinese saying goes:food is everything.The tradition is to have different main courses everyday from the 1st day of the New Year to the 15th day of the New Year,from Jiao Zi (dumplings),noodles,spring rolls,sticky rice cakes,and Tang Yuan (stuffed rice balls).Besides culinary satisfaction,each food has a meaning as well:for instance,Jiao Zi looks like gold,implying a wealthy year ahead.Besides eating,young people visit older family members and kids are blessed with a red pack of "lucky" money.And then,people gather and eat again (!),leading to a lot of advertisements about fitness right after the Chinese New Year holiday.Maybe you don't observe this holiday,but I still wish you Happy Chinese New year!
I am really enthusiastic about getting to know you,and I will be glad to get your reply as soon as possible.
Yours,sincerely friend,
Wudan
Dear,
Hello,nice to me to.My name is Wudan.I am twelve years old.I live in a big city called Wuxi.Wuxi is beautiful；there are hundreds of thousands of flowers,trees,tall buildings and houses.Do you know where I come from Tell you what,I am from Xin'an Elementary school.My school is big.There are a lot of students and teachers in it.These people formed a warm family.
To tell you the truth,I have some interesting hobbies,such as writing essays and drawing pictures.Writing essays is my favorite hobby.I always write down my true feelings.Drawing is my the second favourite hobby.Because my paintings are very beautiful,I received many awards.I also won the first prize in a national competition.
Now,China is to hold the most important festival-the Spring Festival.What does the festival mean?The term "pass year" is used for the Spring Festival (Chinese New Year's Day).The word "Year" in Chinese characters used to mean a horrible beast.To combat the beast,the Chinese hang "good luck" wishes on red paper on the door and shoot off fireworks,believing that the beast fears red things and fire.This tradition in many ways resembles the Western belief of using garlic and crosses to fight against vampires.Why New Year is so special?The Chinese zodiac features 12 animals in the sequence of Rat,Ox,Tiger,Rabbit,Dragon,Snake,Horse,Sheep,Monkey,Rooster,Dog,and Pig.This year is the year of Tiger.Each animal represents a different "personality".According to legend,people held a conference with all the animals,informing them that they would pick the 12 to represent the zodiac.However,in spite of being fast,the cat was not picked as its then-close friend,the rat,did not wake it up.This action sparked off a rivalry that continues till this day.What do people do during the Spring Festival?Eat,eat again,and then eat some more!As the old Chinese saying goes:food is everything.The tradition is to have different main courses everyday from the 1st day of the New Year to the 15th day of the New Year,from Jiao Zi (dumplings),noodles,spring rolls,sticky rice cakes,and Tang Yuan (stuffed rice balls).Besides culinary satisfaction,each food has a meaning as well:for instance,Jiao Zi looks like gold,implying a wealthy year ahead.Besides eating,young people visit older family members and kids are blessed with a red pack of "lucky" money.And then,people gather and eat again (!),leading to a lot of advertisements about fitness right after the Chinese New Year holiday.Maybe you don't observe this holiday,but I still wish you Happy Chinese New year!
I am really enthusiastic about getting to know you,and I will be glad to get your reply as soon as possible.
Yours,sincerely friend,
Wudan
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