请大家帮忙看看这篇短文和段落有什么错误的地方和需要改进的地方
请大家帮忙看看这篇短文和段落有什么错误的地方和需要改进的地方
My last weekend was interesting.Let me tell you about my last weekend.On Saturday night,I played badminton with some friends at the park.The park is my favorite place.I helped my mother cooked lunch in the afternoon.My mother taught me how make lunch.In the evening,I did my homework.On Sunday morning,I went to the zoo.Everything was about animals and I am interesting in that.I went boating with my father in the afternoon.It was so much fun.In the evening,I studied for an English test.All in all,I like my last weekend very much
My last weekend was interesting.Let me tell you about my last weekend.On Saturday night,I played badminton with some friends at the park.The park is my favorite place.I helped my mother cooked lunch in the afternoon.My mother taught me how make lunch.In the evening,I did my homework.On Sunday morning,I went to the zoo.Everything was about animals and I am interesting in that.I went boating with my father in the afternoon.It was so much fun.In the evening,I studied for an English test.All in all,I like my last weekend very much
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My last weekend was interesting.let me tell you about my last weekend.On Saturday night,I played badminton with some friends in the park.The park is my favorite place.I helped my mother (to) cook lunch in the afternoon.My mother taught me how (to) make lunch.In the evening,I did my homework.On Sunday morning,I went to the zoo.Everything was about animals and I (was) interesting in that.I went boating with my father in the afternoon.It was so much fun.In the evening,I studied for an English test.All in all,I like my last weekend very much.
My last weekend was interesting.let me tell you about my last weekend.On Saturday night,I played badminton with some friends in the park.The park is my favorite place.I helped my mother (to) cook lunch in the afternoon.My mother taught me how (to) make lunch.In the evening,I did my homework.On Sunday morning,I went to the zoo.Everything was about animals and I (was) interesting in that.I went boating with my father in the afternoon.It was so much fun.In the evening,I studied for an English test.All in all,I like my last weekend very much.
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