帮我看一下这英语自我介绍有语法错误吗?急——————

帮我看一下这英语自我介绍有语法错误吗?急——————
Hello every one!My name is XXX I’m 13 years old I come from 41 middle school I'm a student.I study very hard every day Because I want get a good future I’m an outgoing girl I like playing sports very much I like playing ping-pong swimming and reading My favorite subject is English because is interesting
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gy2009 幼苗

共回答了18个问题采纳率：83.3% 举报

want to do 少了to
because it is interesting少了it

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湟水河 种子

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Hello every one! My name is XXX .I’m 13 years old. I come from 41 middle school .I'm a student. I study very hard every day.
Because I want to get a good future.
I’m an outgoing girl .
I...

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lijianen001 幼苗

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Hello every one! My name is XXX .I’m 13 years old .I come from 41 middle school . I study very hard every day.Because I want to get a good future .I’m an outgoing girl .I like playing sports very much. And I like reading too. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting.希望能帮到你。

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雪天的故事 幼苗

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应该是want to get，want后要加动词不定式；future不可数，前面不能加冠词a；最后一句应是because it is interesting，否则结构不完整。注意再加些连接词润色。

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qingfeng10 幼苗

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41改成No.41
I want get...这句改成I want to live well in the future我想在未来生活的好，比你的说法好一点
I like playing sports very much I like playing ping-pong swimming and reading改成I like playing sports very much ，i...

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