一篇很短的英语自我介绍,请大家帮我纠正一下语法错误,

一篇很短的英语自我介绍,请大家帮我纠正一下语法错误,
good afternoon~
It is really my honor to have this opportunity for a interview,I will introduce myself briefly,i am 20 years old,born in Sichuan province ,a beautiful place of china,and i am still a sophomore student at Sichuan University Jinjiang College,my major is Environmental Art.I spend most of my time on study,i have acquired many knowledge of my major during my school time.And the School’S scholarships returned My efforts.
I think i may be a Creative thinker,when I was stady in Kindergarten,a Magazine had published my idea,so I always believe I would be a good designer.
Always something fresh can attract my attentionl,new environment ,new product ,maybe we’ll meet some problems near by,but if we keep on learning new knowledge,nothing is impossible~
France is a Famous city for romantic and artistic,as other designers,France is deeply attracted to me,If I had the opportunity to go there,I think my design capability can be Greatly improved.
Time is tightm,wish my confession will give you a good impression,thank you!
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