能不能帮忙看下这篇短文哪有错误Beijing opera Beijing opera is our national o
能不能帮忙看下这篇短文哪有错误
Beijing opera
Beijing opera is our national opera .It's very famous .It has about 200 years of history .Many people like to see Beijing opera ,because there are many interesting story in it .From Xipi and Erhuang .There are four main roles in the Beijing opera .It is a very important part of chinese culture .And it is also famous in the world .And it's very popular with old men and old women and many children .
Beijing opera
Beijing opera is our national opera .It's very famous .It has about 200 years of history .Many people like to see Beijing opera ,because there are many interesting story in it .From Xipi and Erhuang .There are four main roles in the Beijing opera .It is a very important part of chinese culture .And it is also famous in the world .And it's very popular with old men and old women and many children .
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see改为watch或enjoy,因为see是“看到”,一般当短暂性动词用（不过see a film也对,呵呵）
there are many interesting story 的story改为stories,复数啊
From Xipi and Erhuang前面的句号不能有吧,这样这就是一个独立的词组了,不是句子,不能单独用
最后两句语法上没什么错误,但and太多,要换一下,It is also famous in the world .In fact it's very popular with most old men and women,as well as many children .
there are many interesting story 的story改为stories,复数啊
From Xipi and Erhuang前面的句号不能有吧,这样这就是一个独立的词组了,不是句子,不能单独用
最后两句语法上没什么错误,但and太多,要换一下,It is also famous in the world .In fact it's very popular with most old men and women,as well as many children .
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