梦翔天地
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所有feels都改成felt,just a moment改成before long吧,最后一行for改成to.
我感觉如果是初中作文的话,也还算行了.但是具体过程没怎么交代啊,前面都没提到出租车观赏,后面就写了司机了.
Mr.Wang wanted to go sightseeing Beijing by taxi.When he arrived,he felt excited...加你原文到wonderful.
Then he got on a taxi to start his trip.
只能这样加了,有可能哪里打错了,仓促
1年前
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