请好心DE大神帮我分析一段作文I have a strong desire to apply for it with m

请好心DE大神帮我分析一段作文
I have a strong desire to apply for it with my family.first of all,my family’senvironment is extremely healthy.my English level is just so so,but I believe it’s not the important for your chinese life.I have a cleve pet.it’s a dog.I think the visiting student must like it.
so much do my family want to take part in the activity that we bought a lot of English book.only in this way can we realize some English culture.
I hope my family will become host family very much!what an excellent thing!
只用指出语法错误便好.在下感激不尽.如有其他建议愿悉听教诲.