港大个人简介..求大神修改..（急）..主要是看看有没有语法错误...

港大个人简介..求大神修改..（急）..主要是看看有没有语法错误...
Since I was told that it is the best university in the whole of Asia,I have been dreaming of going to the University of Hong Kong.The history since 1910 and the study atmosphere really appeal to me.Meanwhile,I’d like to face the challenge of a new language,a new life,and a new way of thinking.As we all know,with outstanding teaching capacity,the University of Hong Kong has professors and students from all around the world.Together with them,I can learn from their unique views,which broadens my global vision.So I decided to apply for HKU
As for major,having considered thoroughly,I choose science as my first choice.I am interested in dealing with problems of physics .In my opinion; science is the basic of my further study.
Concerning about future,while I always have a desire and determination for good quality graduate work,I’d like to improve my capacity for analytical thinking and ability to work independently.I am sure that life in the university can help shape my character.So I hope that I will be able to have an insight into the essence of human and be a farsighted person.
I am looking forward to becoming a member of HKU eagerly.I believe I will be the proud of HKU someday in the future.